Wednesday, February 25, 2009

Week 5: LEAD SENTENCE

Shelly sat up paralyzed with fear. www.geocities.com


Jane Lebchenco, the Oregon marine biologist President Obama picked to lead the National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration(NOAA.)

These lead sentences are both summary leads. The first one caught my attention because it sounds like it's about to be a scary story in which i happen to love scary stories. I favor the second one because i want to be a biologist and almost anything dealing with science is interesting to me.

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